LOSIE,THIS ESSAY IS MUCH TOO BROAD, BUT THERE IS PLENTY OF TIME TO REFINE YOUR C

Losie,This essay is much too broad, but there is plenty of time to refine your claim of policy for the upcoming draft of the paper. You have to have a claim of policy that is exact and that gives your readers one particular area for your argument, one that some people would agree and other people would be disagreeing to. You have mentioned a few of these areas briefly (writing of resumes, internships, and professional networking), but you have to write about one of them to make the paper more powerful and professional. I will give you an example of a claim of policy here:“College student internships should be only 25 hours per week to allow students to have time for their classes too.”That type of claim would make the paper more precise. You will want to have quotations in the paper too. You will have to edit the paper for problems in usage, punctuation, and formatting in your paper. I will be available to answer your emails if you have any questions about revising your writing.